Korekty

Text from Alessioxx - English

  • One European citizen in four is at risk of poverty.

  • The extremely low salary level concerns 10% of the employed population.
  • Also, child poverty is close to 27%.
  • Europe Union has to respond to the request by those who have lagged behind, otherwise there can be no talk regarding upturn or rebound.
  • This is the message sent out by the European commission in the conference called “The European Pillar of Social Rights”, which was held to promote social policies.
  • Nowadays, one European citizen in four is at risk of poverty or social exclusion, and additionally in-work poverty, namely the extremely low salary level, concerns almost 10% of the employed population.
  • Also, child poverty, which has almost reached 27%, is cause for extreme concern, therefore European Union needs to find a solution to all this.
  • The situation is so critic that the social agenda cannot be postponed anymore.
  • The European commission has suggested that member states should start taking a series of actions which will provide for appropriate salaries, guaranties for accessing to the essential services, for instance the right of housing, and measure to tackle poverty.
  • The actions taken so far have produced/yielded results, but accessing to these services is often fragmented, making difficult to get help for those who are in need.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
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  • Zdanie 3
    • Europe Union has to respond to the request by those who have lagged behind, otherwise there can be no talk regarding upturn or rebound.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • This is the message sent out by the European commission in the conference called “The European Pillar of Social Rights”, which was held to promote social policies.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Nowadays, one European citizen in four is at risk of poverty or social exclusion, and additionally in-work poverty, namely the extremely low salary level, concerns almost 10% of the employed population.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • Also, child poverty, which has almost reached 27%, is cause for extreme concern, therefore European Union needs to find a solution to all this.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • The European commission has suggested that member states should start taking a series of actions which will provide for appropriate salaries, guaranties for accessing to the essential services, for instance the right of housing, and measure to tackle poverty.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • The actions taken so far have produced/yielded results, but accessing to these services is often fragmented, making difficult to get help for those who are in need.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9