Korjaukset

Text from SurfsUp777 - English

  • Showing Off In the Train

  • I was surprised to notice how annoyed I was by the group of young American women who were chatting loudly in the crowded train.
  • I looked at them and one of them looked back so I made it clear that their behavior was totally inappropriate.
  • I knew that they were talking loudly on purpose just to get attention from the rest.
  • Then one young foreign businessman entered the train and he was obviously embarrassed to see this group.
  • Before reaching one of the main train station, the girls started to talk and laugh louder that the boys hushed them feeling also embarrassed.
  • Not that Japanese people never have conversations in the train, but we do not talk like deaf or half deaf people.
  • It was a clear invasion of privacy in a public place (if you know what I mean) and foremost it was extremely embarrassing behavior.
  • I think that what annoyed me the most is that they had done it purposefully just to annoy the rest of the people in the train.
  • I wish these type of tourists never came to visit Japan or any other country.
  • However, speaking to a deaf person is meaningless which is the reason why nobody said a word but just endured their brutal behavior.

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

  • Otsikko
  • Lause 1
    • I was surprised to notice how annoyed I was by the group of young American women who were chatting loudly in the crowded train.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1
  • Lause 2
    • I looked at them and one of them looked back so I made it clear that their behavior was totally inappropriate.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
  • Lause 3
  • Lause 4
  • Lause 5
    • Before reaching one of the main train station, the girls started to talk and laugh louder that the boys hushed them feeling also embarrassed.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5
  • Lause 6
    • Not that Japanese people never have conversations in the train, but we do not talk like deaf or half deaf people.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6
  • Lause 7
    • It was a clear invasion of privacy in a public place (if you know what I mean) and foremost it was extremely embarrassing behavior.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7
  • Lause 8
    • I think that what annoyed me the most is that they had done it purposefully just to annoy the rest of the people in the train.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8
  • Lause 9
  • Lause 10
    • However, speaking to a deaf person is meaningless which is the reason why nobody said a word but just endured their brutal behavior.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10