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  • Showing Off In the Train

  • I was surprised to notice how annoyed I was by the group of young American women who were chatting loudly in the crowded train.
  • I looked at them and one of them looked back so I made it clear that their behavior was totally inappropriate.
  • I knew that they were talking loudly on purpose just to get attention from the rest.
  • Then one young foreign businessman entered the train and he was obviously embarrassed to see this group.
  • Before reaching one of the main train station, the girls started to talk and laugh louder that the boys hushed them feeling also embarrassed.
  • Not that Japanese people never have conversations in the train, but we do not talk like deaf or half deaf people.
  • It was a clear invasion of privacy in a public place (if you know what I mean) and foremost it was extremely embarrassing behavior.
  • I think that what annoyed me the most is that they had done it purposefully just to annoy the rest of the people in the train.
  • I wish these type of tourists never came to visit Japan or any other country.
  • However, speaking to a deaf person is meaningless which is the reason why nobody said a word but just endured their brutal behavior.

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  • câu 1
    • I was surprised to notice how annoyed I was by the group of young American women who were chatting loudly in the crowded train.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I looked at them and one of them looked back so I made it clear that their behavior was totally inappropriate.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Then one young foreign businessman entered the train and he was obviously embarrassed to see this group.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Before reaching one of the main train station, the girls started to talk and laugh louder that the boys hushed them feeling also embarrassed.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • Not that Japanese people never have conversations in the train, but we do not talk like deaf or half deaf people.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • It was a clear invasion of privacy in a public place (if you know what I mean) and foremost it was extremely embarrassing behavior.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • I think that what annoyed me the most is that they had done it purposefully just to annoy the rest of the people in the train.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
  • câu 10
    • However, speaking to a deaf person is meaningless which is the reason why nobody said a word but just endured their brutal behavior.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10