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dewi_khofi szövege - English

My friend, please correction my sentence,
Hi guys, nice to meet you, i'm new member here, my name is ofi, i'm from Lombok island in Indonesian near Bali.
I join this club to increase my knowledge about how to speak english, and to have a friend, i hope we can become friends, thanks for your time to correction my sentence :)

Cím
- My friend, please correction my sentence,
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- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Cím
Mondat 1
- Hi guys, nice to meet you, i'm new member here, my name is ofi, i'm from Lombok island in Indonesian near Bali.
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 1
Mondat 2
- I join this club to increase my knowledge about how to speak english, and to have a friend, i hope we can become friends, thanks for your time to correction my sentence :)
  Szavazz most!
- ADJ HOZZÁ EGY ÚJ JAVÍTÁST! - Mondat 2