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Văn bản từ dewi_khofi - English

  • My friend, please correction my sentence,

  • Hi guys, nice to meet you, i'm new member here, my name is ofi, i'm from Lombok island in Indonesian near Bali.
  • I join this club to increase my knowledge about how to speak english, and to have a friend, i hope we can become friends, thanks for your time to correction my sentence :)

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Hi guys, nice to meet you, i'm new member here, my name is ofi, i'm from Lombok island in Indonesian near Bali.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I join this club to increase my knowledge about how to speak english, and to have a friend, i hope we can become friends, thanks for your time to correction my sentence :)
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2