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  • My friend, please correction my sentence,

  • Hi guys, nice to meet you, i'm new member here, my name is ofi, i'm from Lombok island in Indonesian near Bali.
  • I join this club to increase my knowledge about how to speak english, and to have a friend, i hope we can become friends, thanks for your time to correction my sentence :)

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    • I join this club to increase my knowledge about how to speak english, and to have a friend, i hope we can become friends, thanks for your time to correction my sentence :)
      투표하세요!
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