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Hello I‘m new here
I'll keep diary everyday so that can improve my poor English .
It came on to snow yesterday， so when I got up in the morning saw the ground is covered with snow .
Since the pollution is getting worse, snow was falling rather small 。However it's snowing at last

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- Hello I‘m new here
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문장 1
- I'll keep diary everyday so that can improve my poor English .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- It came on to snow yesterday， so when I got up in the morning saw the ground is covered with snow .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Since the pollution is getting worse, snow was falling rather small 。However it's snowing at last
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3