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Hello I‘m new here
I'll keep diary everyday so that can improve my poor English .
It came on to snow yesterday， so when I got up in the morning saw the ground is covered with snow .
Since the pollution is getting worse, snow was falling rather small 。However it's snowing at last

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- I'll keep diary everyday so that can improve my poor English .
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- It came on to snow yesterday， so when I got up in the morning saw the ground is covered with snow .
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- Since the pollution is getting worse, snow was falling rather small 。However it's snowing at last
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