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從ling814l來的文本 - English

  • Hello I‘m new here

  • I'll keep diary everyday so that can improve my poor English .
  • It came on to snow yesterday， so when I got up in the morning saw the ground is covered with snow .
  • Since the pollution is getting worse, snow was falling rather small 。However it's snowing at last

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